So I made this cover letter and thought it showed I’d be dedicated to their field and wanting to learn. While have experience and schooling in certain fields that may benefit their business. Then that I am really good with customers?

Though I showed my mom and grandma. My mom owns a photography business and my grandma used to do interviews for churches. My grandma said that it is absolutely amazing and perfect. While my mom simply just say don’t use it but literally won’t give any explanation into her thought process… so please can anyone let me know, would this be good to use for a job application or to take into the interview?

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    4 months ago

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    Greetings,

    My current experience is in sales and customer service, however I am interested in exploring other avenues and am open to new industries.

    My current studies have included: business management, marketing, and accounting. However I believe to truly excel that is not enough and try to learn other fields in my own time. Specifically psychology and sociology as I believe that has an important crossover with marketing.

    Attached is my resume if you have any questions please don’t hesitate to reach out to me at: (email and phone).

    Very respectfully,

    @Daddyslittleslut